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Gargoyle by Moonlight
Written by: TDR Bach
Pencils: Me
Page 4
Hey its Carl the Janitor!!!
I love days when I am walking through the store and I look over and I see someone that is the character that I have in my head but cant draw. This totally happened with Carl. I was trying to really pan out what he looked like and I was in the grocery store and BAM Carl walked past me. The most worn down complacent muse I had ever seen. Anyway Carl here in these pages begins to come down with a case of the crazies!
Written by: TDR Bach
Pencils: Me
Page 4
Hey its Carl the Janitor!!!
I love days when I am walking through the store and I look over and I see someone that is the character that I have in my head but cant draw. This totally happened with Carl. I was trying to really pan out what he looked like and I was in the grocery store and BAM Carl walked past me. The most worn down complacent muse I had ever seen. Anyway Carl here in these pages begins to come down with a case of the crazies!
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lol, Carl.
I like that he has no chin and the different shape of his nose. But I think in panel two his nose would stick out a bit more towards the end because of the angle you are choosing. We want to be looking up at it, and the rest of his face is at that angle. But his nose is more straight on, and a little too much to the left.
I love that last panel. Good foreshortening!. I think you got his face just right here. His belt could be a little higher, and we could see his leg better. Maybe the seems of his pants and fly, right now its pretty abstract below the belt. Sorry for the awkward sentence.
His mop head disappears in panel 4. fyi.
I like that he has no chin and the different shape of his nose. But I think in panel two his nose would stick out a bit more towards the end because of the angle you are choosing. We want to be looking up at it, and the rest of his face is at that angle. But his nose is more straight on, and a little too much to the left.
I love that last panel. Good foreshortening!. I think you got his face just right here. His belt could be a little higher, and we could see his leg better. Maybe the seems of his pants and fly, right now its pretty abstract below the belt. Sorry for the awkward sentence.
His mop head disappears in panel 4. fyi.